I see you are starting to branch out in what you design. Nice to see you exploring others types of styles. Well the piece itself is interesting and has nice movement. The inclusion of your name and the title doesnt really need to be so pronounced. Or even need to be there at all. It would be a sound pice of design after after that. I like the 2d shapes you chose, and made them work together. Seem a bit over cluttered on the compostional side. You could take the top faded abstract part out, and I think it could enhance it some. Give yourself a little more negative space to play with.